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Post by kenny on Nov 15, 2005 20:56:01 GMT -5
I'm ironing out my satire and warming up for the second episode, which features a comicly bad shootout between terrorists and US Marines.
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Post by kenny on Nov 15, 2005 20:58:24 GMT -5
I can dub all of the terrorist lines, if needed.
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Post by kenny on Nov 15, 2005 21:00:30 GMT -5
Though, we will need dry ice for a segment where Abdul tries to blow up a telephone with a rocket propelled grenade and it goes out a door. We need a smoke trail.
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Post by kenny on Nov 16, 2005 9:48:39 GMT -5
Here's a peek into how chaotic this film is in terms of humor:
"The following events take place in no particular order. If you are trying to make a timeline, you have no life. Get one."
(That's knocking off of the intro to each episode of 24: "The following takes place between this time and that time. Events occur in real time." Getting it?)
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Post by Eric T. Jones on Nov 16, 2005 17:40:10 GMT -5
While the content is, indeed, of somewhat controversial nature, I'll let this one pass (Richie and I had a movie concept a year ago whose dialogue was just as racist)- what I've heard, just keep the funny bits in, and the unfunny crap out.
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Post by kenny on Nov 16, 2005 20:29:29 GMT -5
Yes, the series may need a little re-working. Perhaps I'll have Bluesabre co-author...
He has a better sense of humor anyway. Not that the existing episode 1 and the in-progress episode 2 aren't hilarious, it does need more and better humor. And it has to make fun of these topics:
Terrorists
Telemarketers
Hostage-Terrorist Relations
Shootouts
Conversations between Terrorists and Telemarketers
Terrorist Telemarketers!
Feel free to post random gags pertaining to the above topics.
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Post by kenny on Nov 16, 2005 20:40:27 GMT -5
And could you make a topic for this in "Upcoming Projects?" Or does this need more time before you accept it, Eric?
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