"They'll be watching you" music video

[tank]

You know those lyrics that I "Copied off the internet *WINK*" which are a parody of "Every breath you take" by "the Police"?

I got a member of Dead Alcemist to take a look at it, he liked what he saw and might get the leader to look at it. If they perform it we can make a video and we might get the MV Constitutionalists to sponsor it.

Brandon asked me to upload it for him.

"They'll Be Watching You"

Pardoy of "Every Breath You Take" by "The Police"
Note: it just goes to the slow beat of the song, the higher paced part of the beat is omitted to keep it from coming off with an angry tone.

Everything you say
Almost every day
Everything you do
With almost anywho
They'll be watching you

Your privacy
In Jeopardy
And just in case
You're a terrorist
You're on the no-fly list

Why can't they see?
We're supposed to be free.
But every tip you take
Every call you make
They'll be watching you

And it's a game
Of cat and mouse
With 3 microphones
And 2 cameras
Hidden in your house

On the Internet
Everyone you met
Looking for key words
You're looking up "Birds"
They'll be watching you

You do not like
The government
And that must mean
That you're building bombs
In your basement

And now you're stuck
In Guantanamo
A prisoner for godness' sake
Of our police state
Cuz they were watching you

Anyone you know
Anywhere you go
There's no place to run
And no place to hide
From the Apartheid.

[Eric T. Jones]

Whenever possible, I'd like visuals pertaining to the lyrics in the music video rather than it all being band shots.

[needless to say, this does constitute being unlicensed music, though I don't know how much of it is protected under the guidelines of parody]

[Skywalker]

it get slightly redundant... if you're going for the play off of Every breath...
work on the lyrics and match it w/ the song tone.

[Hanna(h)]

The original does become quite redundant as well-yes, The Police put different actions into the song for what they'll be watching for, but it's basically the same.
As for the lyrics, I was reading them along to the song playing in the background (thanks, Dad). Even in the second stanza, it was starting to become a little awkward, since the words and the music weren't matching up.
In short, I agree with Aniket on the actions needed to be taken in order to make this better, just not the same reasons.

[tank]

Can someone mix the lyrics around so it works better?